The first thing I appreciate when reading into this blog is the bullet point form when making a list of insights. This writing style provides readers with a strong and clear understanding of the materials.
The second thing I like is how Alison used blackened characters. This follows the Signaling Principle, so the readers understand more clearly what the following text means. Alison used a mix of text and pictures, which also follows the multimedia principle.
I wonder if it could result in a better blog if Alison talks specifically about the content of his sketchnote on baking chocolate chip cookies so that I can understand his work better while reading through the multimedia learning principles he spoke of.
In summary, Alison did a great job on the blog, and I hope to see more of his work in the future!